Sunday, May 04, 2008

Josh's Poem

My son Josh wrote a poem which I really enjoyed. He's 16 and, I think, is very talented. Hope you enjoy it as much as I do.

His eyes glistened in the twilight,

His sights; saturated with serene surroundings

The flowers, all white, glowed in the pre dusk lighting

and the entire setting was cascaded by an enchanting

illuminescence

The air was calm and still and permeated a comfort beyond

Tranquility

An orb of water formed on his lashes and dropped.

It’s twin plummeted after, followed by a modest stream,

down his cheek.

As it flowed, it dispelled all stress that clung to him

He passed trees that were displayed in a curious manner

between the street lamps and emanations of the unseen sunset.

Much was going on but there was no noise.

2 comments:

Tawnya Shields said...

This was so beautiful. He is a very sensitive and talented young man. :o)

sinver said...

GO JOSHU!!!!!!
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